All Comments on 'Visiting Aunt Alexis'

Love it!!

You changed the polynesian characters name part way through. Noelani to Lelani. I prefer the latter because Noelani is too close to the central character's name.

Otherwise very nicely done!

So hot I forgot to quibble.

Sorry 'bout the Noelani/Leilani name change, folks. I musta got caught up in all the sex. Heheheh. ;-)

....but couldn't stop stroking to note it. Damn Damn that was hot.

Great story, couldn't stop playing with myself!

A very fun story to read, not all sex, and not too much build up, very well detailed, hopefully a part 2? I agree with the other, i liked the second name for the polynesian woman more.

I loved it but ,, I normally over look spelling & factual errors.

How can someone shave, then have pubes ?

"she was glad she'd SHAVED HER PUSSY before she left and her nipples stiffened with excitement.

Alexis' eyes sparkled and she licked her lips at the naked beauty before her. Her firm breasts, long legs, pink nipples and PUBES"

Then

"SAW ALEXIS SNORING softly beside her"

how can you see something that can only be heard ?

I know I am being trivial but when a great story has these mistakes it should be pointed out.

Fantastic story please Keep it going

Great story, FF sex is so hot and here you have four females mixing it up.

Yep there were a few mistakes but being into the story they were easily overlooked.

Keep up the good writing.

you changes the womans name... she had an n name and you changed it in the middle?

Hoping for a part two.

Written by a man for men -- very unconvincing. He knows little about women.

WOW!!!!

THIS WAS EPIC!!!! :)

IT GOT ME AND MY 3 ROOM MATES OFF TWICE INDIVIDUALLY AND 3 TIMES TOGETHER!!!! :)

THANK YOU!!!! :)

this was so good!

Love it!

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