All Comments on 'Visitor from the Mothership Ch. 04'

stunningly!!!

This story is quickly becoming my absolute favorite. Keep up the awesome work. =)

Another great chapter. but i get the feeling Eric is in for a surprise and maybe not a truely good surprise.

great story but finding the time for the whole thing was hard. Half this long over two days would have been nice.

Enough with all the muscle crap, they were fine when they were a minor part and added a bit of a mix up, but now it's just becoming kind of gross.

He claims to love his Mother Edora, but he didn't make love to her or give her any eggs at all this chapter and I'm not sure he did last chapter either.

Tama/guardians have basically totally taken over for the last few chapters and the Mothers and Edora are now bit parts and this chapter was a lot poorer because of it.

I nearly stopped reading several times because you've changed the story from a aliens/breeding/love story into this muscle bound dominant crap with him uselessly coming into his pants or guardians half the time.

Hoping there is more chapters to follow for this great storyline, soon!! :-)

It kind of get old with all the mind games and wrestling with the bull dikes, sorry, the guards. This chapter isn't nearly as good as the others. Hope we get to see what happens to the eggs after they hatch and get back to the original premise of the story.