All Comments on 'Vivid'

That was so enjoyable - a welcome change from a lot of the harder stuff in this category. Thank you for posting this sweet little story for us.

Thank you, anon! :) I wanted to add that this story is very much based on my real lifestyle. My dom and I are very much equals until he decides to take what he owns!

I agree with first anon. This is a wonderful story. For me, it is truely more powerful than the dark and edgy types because of the elemental relationship shown. Care, trust, mutual knowledge. I completely relate to the idea of needed to be reformatted.

Just a personal thing, I had to reread to be sure he had slapped both BUTT cheeks, not FACE cheeks. Face slapping is a hard limit for me and it brought me up short when I wasn't sure for a second. Face slaps would have seemed out of place for these two in this moment.

Please, write more.