by hiddenthinker
it is a good lead in to a real story about a bro/sis fuckfest so I hope you are going to write some more.
I liked it, it was interesting and I would love to read more. However for me the biggest issue was that it was to fast passed. You really didn't get a feel for their personalities or any real character development. For me it was a quick 5 minute read about a random dude with a foot fetish and a sister complex that got satisfied way to quickly. I would love to read this revamped with a bit more back story on the characters.
Do you think you can make a chapter 2? This was awesome!
i literally got hard just reading and even wacked off. my personal favorite keep them cumming. haha
I myself can't stand feet so I basically skimmed this story, i do like to read comments though and I'd have to say that the writer DID put this story in the right category. Had the writer put it under fetish, someone who likes feet but is repulsed by incest may have been offended. When clicking on this story you instantly know what you're getting into. The word "feet" is in the title!
this is a good story...looking forward to reading more...
Orion is full of crap. You could have put it anywhere you wanted to and it was still a damned good story!!!
Even though this story involves a brother and sister I believe this should have been in Fetish. The thrust of the story is about Feet with action between siblings secondary to the fetish.