All Comments on 'Waiting'

What a well written short story. It flowed nicely with with enough details about the character to make you interested. What a bittersweet ending. I'm sorry you've never posted more. I think that they would have been great to read. I hope you still check this site and find this comment. If you are still writing, maybe you can update your bio and let us know?

I cried when I thought about innocent Paul still waited for his love until he died. I could give you 100 star if possible!!!