All Comments on 'Waiting All Along Ch. 02'

cant wait for the next story update soon

but you've just lost me..i hate it when writers of i/r stories reference "white cock" or "black pussy". that is so simple minded. btw the "handle" on a sofa is called the arm.

is just using sex talk. You know when you are fucking and you really get into it you say all kinds of crazy shit. I am trying to see if i like the hero. So far, I dont know. He left this woman for 10 years to raise their child. Now he walk back in her life like aint shit happened. And he get some pussy. He just aint right. But this is the writers story to tell. Im just gonna keep with this story and hopefully ill start liking the hero.

I know this is building up to something. Don't make your readers wait too long to find out what. The storyline isn't too far fetched. I was in a situation where I hooked up with my baby daddy after years of separation almost just like this story.

Rather graphic, but still a five.

They still love each other, though they've been away from each other. Family should stay out of relationships unless they are trying to intervene for health, safety reasons. Learn to be communicative with your husband/wife/children.

He should have had to earn his way back into her heart, along with getting to know his son. It was unrealistic for him to pop into their lives and within minutes be all over her --and she let him--with the bad history between them. Good writing and just me reading. Thanks