All Comments on 'Waiting for Aphrodite'

Very believable and quite sexy.

...even though it took four pages before either character was sympathetic at all.

I'm glad I stuck with it through to the end, though!

Good build-up, not your average characters (& not porn stars) made it believable. Good, caring sex at the end & a lovely finish. I missed the connection to Aphrodite, seems more about true love, but I put gods & goddesses in my stories, so why not? It adds depth.

Great story, A real turn on, can you please write about an older female virgin!

Thanks, Sandy!

This story is great! I love how you write. It is a rare occasion on this site that the actual writing fascinates as much as the sexiness. There were a couple profound moments for me, when you put things into words expressing my thoughts that I had never actually expressed, so I am truly impressed. Please write more stories like this!

Wpw, this wad an amazing & deep charavter study. When Rick & Jackie came together, finding each other, it eas explosive, raw, sexy, but your wtiting - it's poetry, ricly literaye prose, with a depth & understanding of human nature that is stunning, gripping. You are an amzing writer, skilled, mature, sensual. Thank you for sharing your stories.

I liked the fact that this was different from anything I'd read on here for a while. Story structure could have been a little more polished but some good observational writing. I wouldn't have liked it so much if Rick hadn't managed to find some humility. I wonder if you wrote this story over a long time? You started out describing Rick as flabby (when he went up the 7 flights of stairs) but by the time he and Jackie were getting it on he was skinny. Still, I was in a generous mood today - 5 stars