All Comments on 'Waiting To Take Off'

That's my opinion

It started off a little slow, but you did work it up to some very hot sexy. I enjoyed the read. Thanks

"lick her left breasts." "Then her other breasts"

Get an editor or proofreader, too many errors:(

... but like below, the edge was off because of grammatical and such errors. An editor could take this from 'wonderful plot' to 'wonderful story'.

All the best,

Eff

(The Dude says)I've always enjoyed your fiction, but I think this one is my favorite. It has the ring of truth about it, something entirely genuine. The whipped cream, the way your described her body, her words... it was perfect.

I GREAT story! The more I read of you, the more I like!