All Comments on 'Waking Up Pt. 01-02'

Very nice story. Looking forward to parts 3 and 4.

I can't wait for the other two parts. So hot.

This a pretty good story nice written not to much sex im lookin forward to the next chapter

Very nicely done. It was well paced and it's intrigue developed at a rate that keeps the reader involved in the story. I am excited to read the next installment of the story and hope you will continue to follow the pattern you set in this story.3

very nice start. can't wait to read more

Such a great story

I hope you build a story and not just a slam dunk "Now we fuck all the time". Let them grow into it. Relationships take time and emotional energy.

This is great writing keep it up, love the beginning, keep it going, there is a lot you can do with this start

You have a very literate easy to read style of writing. I like the slow buildup which promises so much. Keep up the good work!

Can't wait for the next chapters--very entertaining--EXCELLENT

Thanks,

Sam

Loved it, can't wait for your next part. Really like when there is a story involved instead of just all sex.

Start to what seems like a great story and by story I mean not just a quick suck and fuck but something to read and enjoy.

So glad you left out any cock size as it's not needed for this story or any other for that matter.

Perfect!...More,please!

It was awesome. Don't stop!

Fantastic story. Nicely detailed. Thank you for sharing and please continue writing!

5* and right to favorites.!!!

I'm loving the story so far. And it looks like is going to get even hotter.

Fantastic story so far and looking for more. 5 Stars

Please find better descriptions for all those thing that you referred to a "stuff". That is a bit amateurish.

this is a great story, cant wait for the next installment, you have a very good style.

Can't wait for more slow burn....!!!!

I really enjoy the way you are slowly building the story, rather than having them jump all over each other like sex craved teens. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

hurry up...MORE!!

Please

This is a really well told story. Love it

This is really well written and realistic, I like your wording, it's erotic but not over the top. Keep it up.

A well written story. Really looking forward to part 3 and 4.

It’s great!