All Comments on 'Warm Night'

First let me say I really enjoyed this story. It was fun, well paced and exciting.

That said I found some of the problems in what I assume was translation distracting. English is a horribly inconsistent language which makes both spell checking and translating in it, difficult. For example, English often has two words with the same pronunciation but completely different meanings. "Hart" refers to a deer while "heart" refers to the center of our emotional feelings as well as our circulatory system.

In the membership section you can request an editor. Normally when this is suggested it's because of weakness in the writing, not so in your case. The primary thing you need is someone with a native grasp of English and its idioms.

Even so I really enjoyed the story and am looking forward to seeing more from you.

Why does Literotica release such badly-written copy to its public?