by J-Stroke
When I said don't keep me waiting, sheez that was quick.
Many thanks for a good story, loved every bit of it.
I will be looking out for any further work of yours.
There were many "love scenes" that I skimmed through, but the story was great. Yes I think I would have preferred having Wunston brought down and then tried, but as in real life, it does not always go the way you think it might - or should. Great - hope for some more SOON.
Absolutely Wonderful story. I liked the characters and the story. Smoking Sex scenes.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Mark
This is an incredibly enjoyable story. I liked almost everything about it, but most of all the character development. I'll be watching for more submissions from you.
This novel was absolutely amazing. The attention to detail, the emotiveness of the characters, the plot as a whole... just outstanding in my opinion. I was completely emotionally invested in the characters, THAT's how vividly you managed to portray them. I was torn apart from reading the last two pages.
You have an astounding talent for writing and I know six years on is a little late to the party for commenting but I sincerely hope you're still writing.
Damn good story
I like my sex mingled with a story not just wham bam thank you ma'am
This story did it for me even though I am male and straight
Loved it & thank you
Very well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What they all said and then some! This is a story worthy of being published and sold everywhere. The attention to detail and character and plot development were excellent! Please keep writing!!!!! :)
I don't go for the novellas, but its about four am
read through it all.
very good sir!!!!!
I really enjoined this story especially all the different flavors of sex and that the characters are flexible in their roles.
Hope you resurface at some point and continue writing.
I'm not generally one for lesbian romances. But you told such an engaging tale. Awesome sex scenes as well. Just great work.