All Comments on 'Warren Butterfield Pt. 01'

I was wondering where K.K. had gotten to.

There was the idea that maybe he had found

greener pastures where he could practice his

art without worrying about the anti-wimp chorus.

<p> Afterall I do not think that I could swallow

my mother-in-law changing my decor without consulting

me. But Megan is a wimp too! Didn't he ever get to

the bottom of why her parents were distant between

themselves.

Thanks for writing it.

Its early but so far Warren seems to nbe very weak Male/ Husband character

There's build up and then there's this. People visit this website to enjoy themselves. You've underestimated what you think the pay off will be when this guy's marriage gets further compromised and one of them strays or perhaps one of them finds out who Warren's dad is or whatever. Even if this did have a happy ending, the build up is pitifully boring and depressing. Do not quit your day job—better yet: Get one.

I like it so far and look forward to the rest. Looks like another fine tale from an excellent author.

I really like the character development. Means I will care about what happens to Butter.

I always look forward to one of your stories. You are one of the finest writers here.

glad, you back with your new story. seems its gonna be good one...

K.K.<p>Interesting so far. I am curious as to where you intend to go with this. I have to agree with an earlier comment regarding your title character. The strength of his backbone is in question what with his not considering other employment and with his tacit acceptance of his mother-in-law's cruel remarks and her manipulation of him and his wife (<i>ie.</i> the furniture). I look forward to the next installment.

Always a plus. Character development is terrific. In three pages we already know enough about Megan, Warren and the mother-in-law from hell to set up our likes and dislikes. It remains to be seen whether the author will let Warren's weakness to continue to the point the marriage is worthless or if there is an underlying strength to the protagonist which allows him to come out on top. Either way, it should be a great read.

I've read the WHOLE story elsewhere. I am very impressed. Soon as I began reading I can't stop anymore until I reached the end. Very good entertainment.

<p>Thank you</p>

<b>Nucleus</b>

Warren is way too nice.

This story is slow in developing but now, after the first chapter, tensions are developing and the story is about to get hot.

Wow! I can't believe it. Finally there is literature in Literotica. Thank you, thank you.

i hope you are heading somewhere you usually do. give us some stuff with all these charaters. there are so many its a bit hard to keep them strait though and then suddenly they disappear. giving us lots of suspects huh?

its time to find mother a job ...just as she did with her furniture ...id find her a job n tell her when she started ...as for brandon if i was buying his clothes hed take what i got him or get off his ass and make the money to buy what he wanted ....id also give them a set day to find somepleace to buy or rent on there own ...as my family always said 2 familys cant live together indefinitely with out getting on each others nerves ...so if she didnt find herself a job n a place to stay id help her ...if she refused a job then id find her a place to rent weekly as in a rooming house and let her n son set up housekeepimg there ...id say when she got tired of living likethat shed find a job...as for brandon id say its time he started showing some responsibility and started working at school and also found a part time job after school ...and if megan didnt want to back me up then im sorry she could move out with mommy also ...im sorry but just because they raised you dont mean you have to take them in forever...sick maybe yes you have to help but even in those circumstances there is always homes that can take her in ....if its not up to her standards well tough titty little kitty then its time to help yourself some ...mil or not i was raised that everyone chipped in and helped out to the best of their ability ...if trish didnt want to then how she wanted to live was up to her ....but someway shed have to either help or sorry here the address mil this is your new place of residence ...enjoy your new home n maybe well invite you over for dinner in a few weeks once you n brandon gets settled ...bye trish bye brandon have a great week

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At last! One of the good writers and storytellers returns, and gives us some new life in the desert wastland that Loving Wives on Lit.com has become. I look forward to the completion of this story because I expect that it will be entertaining as well as dramatic.<p>

Have a very good day!

Warren should just ask the devil to move in and take Trish and Brandon with him back to hell then serve Megan with divorce papers

An excellent start for this story. You could sell this one to Red Book! It would appear he has three areas for his life to fall apart! If all three hit him it might be totally destructive!

looming dark and ominous... Great build up, characters and all. I hope you succeed later on to keep an even pace without rushing at the end (as I have seen too often). But so far so good!

One thing about K.K. stories. They are either very good or very bad. This one is starting out as one of his very good ones.

60 year old George

Excellent writing and an engaging storyline. Five stars.

Excellent setup! Looking forward to next chapter!

First, all of Trish's nasty-ass furniture would be THROWN out. Broken or not. His furniture should be moved back in. Got a problem with that Trish? Good then I'm man enough to evict you and your twerp freeloading offspring too. Meghan has a problem with that?? She can leave as well. Choose sides - game on. Man up!!

Still five stars. Still love it.

I do not know what will happen.

Based on what i have read so far, Megan is a keeper!

Warren settled for too little as regards his carieer. His situation at work affects his self esteem.

Warren's mother-in-law is a bitch. However it was wrong to start a shouting match.

The situation at home will adversely affect Megan & Warren's marriage and sex life.

in the woodworks and wood products, TK U MLJ LV NV

Very readable with good character development but, there's always a but, but what has happened to Megan. She seems to be left out of the story, all we have heard is her telling Warren not to shout at Trish. Surely there should be a conversation between Warren and Megan about what is an unhappy situation. I suppose that any comment made here will reflect something of the character of the commentator. But, it's that but again, i would think that a stand up flaming argument would have taken place about two weeks after Trish moved in and Warren wanting to know why Megan has changed into a door mat for her mother. That is my only negative in what is a very plausible story.

I do hope this story gets some traction pretty soon and starts going somewhere. Because I’m already starting to lose interest in it.

Seems to me that this tale is getting interesting. Yep, Uh Huh. Interesting! LP

Why don't the commenters leave the author alone. He's writing his story from his imagination. when it's finished we can all piss & moan about it all you want . Bruno

weird and rather slow story. But, onto part 2 to see what happens.

Just say no. Take an assertive stand, set expectations and kick her out if she can't toe the line. Pretty basic stuff. You shouldn't have to ruin your life to be polite. This means your priorities are out of whack.