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"How long would it take for you to make armor for our men." Look at Majesty for a moment then look at Salen and Karton.
"Four days on the outside." Majesty nods then.
"Alright, so four days we will lead a group to the border, the scouts are reporting trouble."
"Will get to be warrior?" Salen and Karton trade a look then both sigh.
"Rather you did not but will stay with you tomorrow and do some training while you are waiting on the form to cool." Clap hands and smile at Salen while Majesty is giggle.
"Wouldn't it be better if she stayed with me?" Karton sigh at this.
"Honestly it would be better if one of us stayed with you. She is not well learned on fighting while we are. Against green skins she can do fine, the armor will stop everything long enough." Look at Karton then Salen and finally Majesty.
"There is plot against you?"
"We may have foiled the one you found for us, but where there is one there will be others."
Not the most wonderful of things to hear, but then also not something for me to worry about. Karton and Salen will handle that, I am to make sure we all are equipped in a fitting manner. Suppose become pregnant is rather important, is what burada are for after all.
- COMMENTS
Crusader235over 5 years agoWhat a fun, and confusing read. Many times I had to back track to figure out who said what. That was the fun of it. I just hope we're not left hanging, and it is finished some time in the future. Five stars.
TJSkywindalmost 8 years agoShe isn't terribly educated, but wants to be a warrior and not stuck at home making babies. Once I got used to the style and word structure, I found the tale engaging.
I would really like to see a chapter or two to resolve the tale. Please continue!
Pornoclesover 8 years agoBut it just got too boring.
Every second sentence out of whatever-the-fuck-the-main-characters-name-is mouth was "want to spread", but you said at the beginning there would be story telling.
And the grammar you are using makes it even worse. You are not even changing dialogue style when a different race is speaking. Not to forget that "Majesty" snorted in response to at least three statements before I stopped reading. Not very dignified for an elf queen.
Most disappointing is that you have not divulged any of the setting lore yet, except for the alternate names for what I assume are dwarves, elves and humans. Though it is more fun to imagine they are really goblins, orks and bugbears who are colourblind. Which explains the grammar and snorting, too.
I'll withhold a rating so as to not reduce your average as some people might be more able to bear the issues.
Btw, is English your mother tongue?
Anonymousover 8 years agoA bit disappointed. In the first chapter she was a tad upset because the fehrada seemed to think all the burada were good for is having babies and spreading their legs. Now a big chunk of her goal seems to be getting pregnant and spreading her legs.
redlion75over 10 years agolove the story line just confused about her not wanting to fuck a male then cant wait to fuck one. the broken english makes it hard to read also.
