All Comments on 'Was I Really In Control?'

I liked this well enough. There were some typos and small grammatical errors, but the story itself seemed quite fun. It kinda reminded me of Magicfingers' "Summer of Discovery" series, which had a similar element of lightning causing psychic phenomenon. I'd like to see some more of this... perhaps something really DID happen to this guy and his daughter has somehow subconsciously created the excuse in order to reconcile the whole event in her mind.

Not really believable. Thanx, anyhow.

Its okay but could use some fixing up here and there.