by rupanita
This story iz okay. Although it was pretty racist callin the African American man a negro. Thats a big ass no no. And also him being constantly referred to as "the black man" is a no no as well. Watch it you could offend people.
Rest is very erotic and good, but the intruder should have had a second go at the ass ( maybe ) and now that the husband knew who the intruder was, a second encounter and a better end would be befitting.
That was fabulous!!!
Please put more description and plot in it like the older stories! You are good.. Keep it up.