All Comments on 'Washing Up?'

Great story so far, but this had better have a sequel! Hope you can keep it realistic. Great interaction between the pair so far.

Roll on Part Deux!

It's well written but come on, atleast finish a page before you submit. This was a waste of time reading.

I like the story so far, but you definately need to finish this!!! This could be a really great story about a brother and sister in love and lust!!! Carry on with it babe!

Good writing!! Keep up the good work!

Ok ..so you're good at getting everyone's attention well , you have it . Now the tough part is can you keep our attention or do you lose it . So far ..so good .

Love it so far - hope it stays that way or gets better.

. . . after the second chapter was already written. I don't think I could have waited otherwise. You really drew me into the story. Very nicely done!

Nice to see someone take the time to build the story instead of just writing a F___ story!

love tha plot lose the 2nd grade talk yo, who the hell adds thingy in a story

I think it's a good start. It reads well and has a good pace. The slight British tone is good too.