All Comments on 'Watching Cindy'

You write sex scenes extremely well....Bravo!

ended nicely in the future allow the lady to be more active in choosing who will fuck her...she really doesn't need her husband's input as he will agree to anyone

Well done, kept my dick hard. Grear fantasy, I'm very envious if it is true

Loved this story. A favorite theme, done well with great slow building tension and a great climax. Believable characters make it better than the norm.

Wow, that was some outstanding read!! I've never left a comment on a loving Wives Story before but this one deserves all the accolades it gets.

The author has taken a pretty common fantasy/scenario and turned it into something fresh and excitingly original. The development of the story, the build up and the slow tease till we got to the hotel room with Joe, Cindy and Steve was fantastic. It added amazing authenticity and realism to the story which unfortunately, is an area where many of the stories in this category sometimes slip. And then the raw lust, the scorching sex and the voyeuristic thrill were so well combined with the emotions of the characters it just made it so utterly believable. An incredibly well written and exciting story to read in a very difficult category to write for. You turned my body and my head on, Joe! Keep up the fantastic work! J

I could only sit her and close my eyes after reading this story and realizing that my wife was the one in this story. Very good, well written and and very real. I can now only imagine it happening this way with my wife.

Wow, very well written story....felt like I was in the room watching too!! Talk about up close and personal!!

Terrific!!

Thanks!

This story is far above most and no doubt the best "wife-watching" one I've read. I do like the theme generally, but Randdude handled it so well, wiuth the believable gradual build-up to the intense vivid climax. This guy can write erotica!

Two thanks! Thanks for the excellent erotic read which I found very stimulating. Also thanks for your comment on my story - thanks for sticking up for me - erm, by this I mean by being on my side against the moaners! Kay x

actual hero always having a massive cock. Count how many times his massive cock is mentioned as such. If the married male is too puny and too insecure to to admit his primary longing is for the massive cock of his wife's lover, and his goal i slife is to pimp her out while some massive cock becomes his.......

submissive again

I totally loved this story! It was written beautifully, and with a fine eye for what is truly erotic. I'm a happily married, but very sexual female, age 35 and just wish I could be Cindy just once! To all those who "dis" this type of story...get a life!

I liked the way the story flowed, it moved along nicely. There were a few mistakes that caused a bump here and there but not enough to distract me. I write on the same subject so give them a look if you have time. Thanks for a fun read.

JP

This had me squirming in my seat, biting my lower lip until it was beet-red! Joe, this was a magnanimously powerful story! I was thrilled to read every line. You made this real, believable, sexually explosive and fun to read. Bravo! My hands are still trembling from the excitement that your work brought to me. Keep up the great work!

I'll be glued to the screen for more.

~Ash

this is one of the best stories i have ever read. wish it could be my wife taking a really big cock while i watch and help.

This is an absolute turn on to me. I loved every word of it an could picture myself in Steve's place, I have a delicous HARD ON from reading it an fantasizing about it all. you are a great author, don't quit writing my friend, don't ever quit,

.........you just might lose the right to that pussy!

Hot story to go with a hot woman. My wife loved the story and wants to try this now.

The worst. 1 star !!

After a few years of being together, fantasies are bound to come up in conversation among adventurous couples who enjoy sex together. Only those who have a strong love for each other will ever be able to give to the other their wildest desires. A thoroughly enjoyable read, believable and lacking overcomplications of thoughts about "what if". thanks for sharing your efforts with us and i look forward to reading more of your work.

Pathetic stroke story. 1* !

Wow! This was an excellent story of a great encounter!! I think I'll have my Fiancé read this as we've talked about it but she is too shy to consider ever trying such a fantasy. I say you should write more as you certainly have the talent for this.

still one of my alltime favorites!

Well done. Great story. Great images. Ridiculously hot!!

So hot and sexy! Made me want a bit of Cindy (or at least watch her getting fucked)!

If I saw a cuck and his whorewife in a bar in Boston, I would slap shit out of the bitch. The whore too.

lucky man...wish i could get my wife to do this!

This was so hot and so well written I had to go back and read it again! You have a real talent for descriptive writing and I look forward to reading more of your work. I sure hope this was real and happened exactly as written. If it did, you are one lucky dude!

Please don't be discouraged by the haters and their bullshit negative comments. Believe me, if they were gutsy enough to try something this bold and fortunate enough to have it all come together, they would be right there watching and 'choking their chicken' like the rest of us! LOL

Once again, awesome story and great work on putting it together!

Wow! Loved it. That was an awesome story and was beyond HOT!

A definite 'must try' for us!

Whew ! Talk about a story that gets the blood boiling. Easily one of the hottest stories that I’ve read on this site. The ultimate encounter between Cindy & Steve was incredibly sensual.

The various emotions that Joe experienced felt real and extremely exciting ! Your writing skills are superb. This is my first read of your stories, but by no means my last.

Without question the easiest 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s ever. This actually deserves 5-🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆’s because every guy who reads this will be jerking off to it over and over !🤪

Thanks for sharing whats in your very fertile and sexy mind,❤️