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- Watching Him Back Ch. 03
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All Comments on 'Watching Him Back Ch. 03'
by Acerbicscribbler
- 42 Comments
xSpiral82about 12 years agoI'm addicted and I just can't get enough.. hahha well damn Just cant have enough of those two :P Really good and different~ ;D
AkshunLoveabout 12 years ago…fuck, I love this story. It's sooooooo good and the sex scenes are so real and hot and innocent and visceral. Awesome! These two are fantastic characters and they deserve a happy ending, so they better godamn get one! You hear??
hopkinscmabout 12 years agoGot to admit that I would have never tried to have sex in the middle of the day while still in school. I usually just skipped and met up with the BF d' jour for that kind of stuff. I'm wondering if my teenage life was misspent or whatever on not getting to experience this. But I'm just a geeky girl with some peculiar reading habits so I guess its not really all together abnormal.
Oh and I love this story. Its witty, but you need to take some time to proof read it or get an editor to help with some of your typos. But even with that said I still added you to my favorites list.
Historicalpassionabout 12 years agoSOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH why can't i just have these two? *whines*
Betterthanmoviesabout 12 years agoAwesome awesome awesome. I love high school stories so much, and I love the relationship the two of them have. Bravo!
canndabout 12 years agoloved it. it was a great commentary on bullying. you put the humanity in jay under the bully that was believable b/c it could only be brought out by him being real friends with Aaron. I liked how they are growing in their relationship. There were funny parts. It was an all around great ch.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoCan't wait for the next one. The series seems so real it's not funny.
rabbitfishabout 12 years agoYour characters feel oddly real, though at first I was expecting them to come off as caricatures. Very well written. Loved it. Please give us more!
rayneintheskyealmost 12 years agoI love this story. You have to continue it. Pretty please :)
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoConfused why you removed the stories from your other account though - they were also great!
courseworkover 11 years agoLove this story, I come back to it a lot hoping there's another chapter. Please write some more!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoPretty, pretty, pretty pleaseeeeee may we have some more!!!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoPlease don't end this story there has to be more.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agowell, he has continued this story and others on his blog. http://acerbicscribbler.blogspot.com
Anonymousalmost 10 years agosorry dude I hate authors who leave you hanging, you wrote this in 2010, now you are posting a story 4 years later...............nah not gonna read any more of your stories.
irishgal1984almost 10 years agoOhh I just love your stories :) I recently discovered you and I was thrilled, I'm loving watching him back but it sucks it isn't finished. Please finish it, it is so beautiful, and your writing style is sublime. If you never write another word, I loved your story, thank you so much for taking the time to write this xxxxx
mislaidthoughtsalmost 10 years agoSo, I've read further chapters on your blogspot website, but I don't have an account there, so I'm commenting here. Rereading this, I like picking up on small stuff I missed before, like how LeAndre knows Aaron's gay and what's going on with him and Crispin.
I really like this story a lot. It's so fucking cute and a lot more nuanced than a lot of other high school stories on this website. Aaron may be in the closet, but he's not repressed which is refreshing, and I can sympathize with his reasons to stay closeted. Like Crispin, I wonder if he's just destined to stay in the closet forever, but he seems to be fairly self aware, and his reservations seem mostly rooted in what his parents will think, not so much what his friends will say.
And I love Crispin so much. He's so sweet and I really want him and Aaron to end up together, even if neither of them believe it's going to happen.
You are one of my favorite online authors, and if you ever decided to turn this story into a novel (or novella), I would buy it in a heartbeat.
Justfeedack09almost 8 years agoYou have such a great start here I wish it was complete. I like the complexity of the main characters and how you've made a VERY common scenario interesting and unique.
suns3tover 4 years agoI think I could read the salty-sweet banter between these two all day; loved their dynamic. So well-written.
QuietScreamerover 4 years agoI've read this story multiple times and really wish I would one day be surprised to find another chapter has been added. Preferably until the story is completed. I think these two are so cute together.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoWhat a fun surprise to see a new chapter! Love it! Hope you write more soon.
Crazyhuhabout 3 years agoThis was one of my favorite stories. Glad you picked it back up, even if it took 9 years. Thank you. I hope there's more to come!
dnsontnover 2 years agoAmazing that the Author picked this story up, seamlessly, after such a long hiatus. Aaron is a fantastic character, full of surprises! I'm pleased I found it in 2021 when there's a possibility of more. Five Stars and following!!
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