by Mr Story Teller
WOW! I just hope that when it happens the description will be vivid and actually show how a "first time" really happens. A fellow can't last too long the first time around, usually, especially in this situation.
You sure do live up to your pen name with your vivid descriptions and details. I can't wait for the next chapters.
good build up and i think the details you give-- for example mentioning that the panties had no gusset-- really add to the story. i just hope in part three you get to fuck her.
Please use full stops. Your writing is erotic, but it would be even better if you used an editor.