All Comments on 'Watching TV with Uncle Gary'

... and very well written! I'd say the ending is a little incongruous, but overall I love the style. The way you describe her reactions is wonderful. It's hard to imagine an 18 year old in today's world actually listening to Mom telling her to save it for her husband, but if you just go with that premise, this is very hot stuff. Great job!

Very well written, I like your story-telling style. The content as far as heat and excitement was not as intense as your first two submissions, but I still enjoyed reading this one very much. Reading your stories is better than watching any erotic motion picture.

The slow, hot pace.

The earlier conditioning.

The slowly melting resistance.

The inner dialogue.

Wow!

Very hot, very descriptive, excellently handled. More, please.

This is one of the most erotic stories I have read on this site. Well written and excellent plot development.

Wow - that was some descriptive writing - it either happened to you - or you were 'Uncle Gary" - very well written - hope it is not a one-off story - give us more please

Wow.....I wish I had you talent of words and story flow. OUTSTANDING......Slickman

I've read a few of your stories, and while they are very good, they use a lot of the same descriptive words. Most notably, the word "Technicolor" seems overused.

You are a superb writer, though I thought the latter half dragged on a little too much and then kind of went too blurry.

does everyone on this site really have to explicitly say that the girl is 18 years old, exactly??? she couldn't be 17, or 19, or just young, or teen, or something?? really!! how disillusioned does it make us all to have to read that one line in EVERY story? that aside, good job, i really liked it.

Ohh my our story's are so sensual and insightful and so so so naughty, You are my favorite author for a while now. You write about things I fantasize about...just so good. Thanks for Your hot story's.

Beautifully crafted, thoroughly believable, deeply erotic - the best I've read here by a long, long way. Thankyou.

Loved the story and loved how its written.

I find your style to be superb. It seems so believable; the language, the setting, the characters. I've read most of your pieces but this is one of my favourites. Thank you.

@Pathetic garbage: The only thing that is pathetic is your comment and your 1*. Clearly you don’t belong on this site, and clearly you’ve read next to nothing on Lit. I hope your 1* is quickly removed in the next sweep—it obviously has nothing to do with the quality of this story. It’s a shame that anyone posts comments just to malign an author, especially one as consistently good as shaunreagh.

Uncle started off as age fifties, then later was age forties - lack of attention to detail spoils a story

I think it is a great story. I love the older guy/younger girl, theme and in this case, uncle/niece. I am imagining her to be about 15, maybe 16 and to me, that makes the story even more exciting. Very hot scenario and I would absolutely love to be Uncle Gary, right now. :-).

Very hot slow burn.

This is an excellent incest taboo story: ★★★★★ (5.0)!

I LOVED this story!

5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥) 👍👍!

I'm copy pasting an earlier comment.

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asiaprof, about 15 years ago

Excellent...

The slow, hot pace.

The earlier conditioning.

The slowly melting resistance.

The inner dialogue.

Wow!

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5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥), 👍👍!

Connie is legal! She is a catch. Potential boyfriends will soon start hitting on her.

5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥), 👍👍!