All Comments on 'Way Up North'

It was a very good short story. Keep them comming.

This story was very cute. I absolutely adore it. Definitely keep them coming!

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this was too cute!! i love a happy ending :)

The lack of realism worried me, with several things jarring early in the story. Given a choice between freezing to death or hobbling along on a broken foot, almost all men would hobble their way out of the forest. (I've broken a foot twice, so I know.) Then it turns out it's just a sprain? Having the guy fall asleep in the lumberjack's arms is hopelessly unrealistic - unless he had a head injury or something similar to account for it, this guy's behaviour is totally off. Then our lumberjack tells him he has "skin like a little girl". Say what? A spot of paedophilia while we're at it? Which is pretty much where I stopped reading . . .

I don't think you intended these things, but if you want to pull your readers into a story, you need to start out be setting up a believable scenario.

This is a sweet story. I immediately fell in love with the Joe. This is the kind of life I dream about. Get out of this lousy city I'm in now and go live in the great outdoors with a person I love...whether it's a man or woman. I enjoyed the story and wouldn't mind it continuing. I know it's a lot of work to write these out and I appreciate what you did here. I will enjoy your other stories. Thanks for posting this.

I really like the rescue and the subtle daddy/son vibe. The part when he's penetrated but feels so safe and protected was a real turn-on. Nice story!

This might be my new favorite story! I loved how romantic it all was. Joe was so sweet helping out bill and then Bill helped out Joe in his own way. And then waiting for Joe for six whole months...man, I can't imagine the hot passionate sweaty sex they had on their honeymoon night when he got back home. Bill is the perfect wife for Joe. I would love another chapter. So hot and cute at the same time.

I really liked this story it was so cute. In my opinion I think a couple things don't make sense and that stopped me from giving it a 5 star rating.

I felt it was odd that they fell in love within 1 night, not that that doesn't happen just between two guys who had never had a male\male expeirence before seems a little odd. What i would have liked was if they stayed in the cabin together for a couple weeks before the love confession. Also some of the dirty talk was a little surpising, hot, but again with no past male\male expierence Bill to be saying "fuck your baby" straight away was odd to me. It would be nice if they have had sex a couple times and Joe called him baby then, I feel it would have given me a little bit more believability. I loved how he waited 6 months, very romantic.

All them same great story I'm just being a dickhead.