by azraeyl
It is difficult for me to understand why I am the first to comment on this fine story. Other readers are missing a lot!
Congratulations azreyl on a fine piece of erotic fiction--or is it fiction. Personal experience perhaps? Very good in any event.
There was some amazing prose there, you painted the picture so vividly. The line "thighs flapping like butterfly wings" is one of the hottest I've ever read.