All Comments on 'We Met On The Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
worst beginner mistake

The absolute worst beginner mistake is to address the story to a "you" who is not the reader.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Thank you

I had a long day at work today too and that's just what I wanted. Someone to fuck me like that. Thanks. ;)

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