All Comments on 'We Survived'

Fantastic story, kept me interested the whole way through, good character development, keep up the good work!

Oh my god, that was an awesome story. As i read it i actually came. Keep up the good work!

Good story. But if you're going to write about characters from the US, you need to not use British terms like "bathers" and "wank".

Great story. Please, please continue.

That was really great story... tampon thing a little awkward, but still a great story

Funny how Malaki hated Caitlin's jock bf, because all he cared about was her looks, when every description Malaki gave of why Caitlin was his dream woman was centered on her red hair and huge breasts. Never once did he mention her sense of humor, her brains, or her personality. Like her bf, Malaki saw her as a hot chick, and that's it.

The character of James came out of nowhere; There had been no mention of a country-boy friend at the school until they were running down the tarmac to get on the plane.

Way too many awkward sentences and grammatical problems to list.

reading this rather unusual but interesting story.

It's funny and cheeky --- and not too developed --- but it is also okay and enjoyable. <p>

They MUST have returned to "civilization", at least for sometime, before returning to living out their lives with their adopted, pigmy people in the shrinking Amazon, no? <p>

Otherswise, it's pretty darn hard to submit this little personal tongue in cheek-ish piece about their mis/adventure! <p>

But, yeah, right: Malaki's bigger gened kids running around, kicking miner/poacher asses in the Amazon, with Caitlin and Malaki's 6'5", 200lb kids, too,,, yeah, they could win against those miners, sure!, especially with posion frog tipped arrows, like those they killed that bad panthers with!! LOL

good story I am interested in other chapters to come.

thanks for entertaining us.

Mike from Texas

a very good story with good characters n all...other than for him being obsesed with her breasts...

...of my favorites. Large breasts and red hair.

i liked reading the story it was well thought out,But the ending was really not that good.

This was a very good story. Except for some small things that i found to get in the way.

Spelling and grammatical errors. And the ending. Not very imaginiative or original. We lived happily ever after, grew old and then Caitlin died.

Did we really need to hear that? could have left it at but that's another story. Leaving it open to write more if you wanted.

As for spelling get someone to check this over for you because spelling and grammatical errors really detract from the story.

Great story but i didn't like the ending, it should have gone on and on in more chapters.

Very hot

A guys nut butter is spelled "cum". Not come.