All Comments on 'Wedding Day Blues'

I'm not sure but it seemed to me that she got of pretty darned light all things considered.

So from that stand point this woman shouldn't have even thought about getting married. And yes she deserved all she got. Although equally if a man did the same thing then he would get the same treatment.

How could she even ask? Of course, deserved. But clearly she is too selfish to know that even after the horrific expereience in the church and everyone's response. Why even ask? Concequences are a ...

Back to your teasing ways, I see. Thanks for another story of almost marital bliss.

Boyd

Another fine story. I might have liked it better if, during her "hen night", the rich groom had arranged to have her strapped to an ottoman on stage and raped by a donkey, but thanks!

Always make out o.k., really even some not so good looking sluts do also, but at least Nick and ole Dave got square, thanks.

the story such a pleasure to read. Amusing, entertaining and well worth the effort that 'tease obviously has put into this. No trickery or trawling for votes (we always know a slut's gonna land on her arse) BUT therein lies my retented 25...did I feel the story a little too flip? Maybe the tongue was a little too firmly cheeked. I would love to read a writer of this calibre doing a serious, heart-breaking, gut wrenching tale of infidelity and anguish...just a thought. Mancelt.

you really deserved more.....

Once her husband to be found out that she was nothing more than a cheating cum sucking slut he should have sold lottery tickets for her ass, which the winner had to take her for the next year, and sell her ass on the street. I think they call that kind of a guy a pimp. Of course her pimp could keep all of the money he made on her, and if he sold her ass for a cheap price he could make some good money off of her. Her pimp's only requirement after his year of pimping her out would be to make sure she doesn't ever come back to town.

So Sayeth the Hubby to Be and Hubbys BF's Wife.

Personally I think she got exactly what she Deserved.

A Little Humiliation and Time will make her decide Either Be A Slut or Grow UP.

:)

Totally selfish bitch!Time to grow up, lady!

....this Britease and you'll have to renounce your citizenship.I only wish you had carried it forward to some sort of epiphany on her part.pistolpackinpete

She was a bitch, slut and a cheat. She even admitted to herself that after her marriage she would continue to cheat. I think she was in it for the money only and not the love. I think it was proper that her parents disowned her and everybody she new up and left her. She got what she deserved and that was too good.

and worse. I wonder what happened with Harry's fiance...

An extreme example of why no one can trust anybody with the lesson being, do not get married..... Fantasy purely!

My only question is whether they support the Arsenal?

She deserved a lot worst than what she got!

All she has to do is stand undressed by the road and fuck whoever is stupid enough to pick her up, after all that fucking around what difference does it make?

Different tactic for this author - interesting. As far as the story - this whore got off as do most ex-slut wives that are created in these types of stories.

Personally, I think the slut got off easy and yes she deserved everything thing she got at the end. Damn good story.

you really want an answer ...yes she did and more

Yes, I do think she was treated too harshly. Do I think that Nick should have married her? No, but he just should have called off the wedding letting her know the reasons why. That's the problem with people today, especially on this site. They have no idea why people act the way they do. We are all slaves to the conditioning of our upbringing. Sure we may know what we are doing is wrong by society's current standards but it is still awfully hard to break that childhood conditioning. I'm not saying she was conditioned to be a slut but obviously, having sex with other men filled what was lacking in her character that she did not get when she was raised. Insecurity probably coupled with overindulgence from her parents. This is not an excuse for her behavior but only an explanation and she finally was held accountable for her actions. Something she never had to endure in her life before this. It's not her parents fault because they are as much a slave to their upbringing as their daughter. We as a society need to look at behavior more objectively rather than labeling people with judgemental terms as good, mean, bad, stupid, low lifes or evil just to name a few. It wasn't that long ago that older men that had many wives and children were considered wealthy, fortunate and wise. Warriors ate the heart of their enemies. Christians would kill those that creamated their dead saying it was a pagan ritual and turn around and gave those that they had just killed a Christian burial to save their souls and they really believed it. Hopefully, in another 200 years we will finally look at behavior more objectively rather than judging the person. So, lighten up, "Those that live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones". Plus, it's only fiction. Once again, a well writtin story. Thank you

Stelsim, obviously we are conditioned by our upbringing, but we are capable of thought and reasoning, she knew what she was doing was wrong but didn't care enough to act on it. How did her husband feel when he found out, how did Dave's wife feel? She wasn't physically harmed in any way, she can continue her life the way she was going. Her husband certianly deserved a little payback for her slutting around, and really all she got was a little embarresment, certianly deserved.

How in the world could they be so mean as to treat poor little innocent Barby like that? The dang meanies maybe farmer jones will come along and fu.. oooops I mean help her . lmao great read Brit keepem comin.

the cheating b*tch got what she deserved, no more, no less.

Thought Dave's wife's name was Mel. But oh well I am glad she was aware about what her husband was up to and humiliated Barby on her big day. Glad Nick wasn't dumb either and slutty Barby got what was coming to her.

This woman was as nasty as they come. Did she deserve to be threated that way? HELLS YES! She cheated with 9 guys sicne becoming engaged and at least 5 on the night before the wedding, who knows how many before that. She is a walkign disease and deserves to be alone.

Mel and Nick should get together. Have some happiness result from this tramp's behavior.

Cunt got off too easy. So did the friend Dave. I like the gall of some women who think its okay to play but their men are off limits. I'm not a chauvinist and I believe in fair is fair, But all cheating whores, wed or not, should die of aids.

No, that's not nice. They should not die. I'm not inhumane. They should just suffer constant pain. That works.

HA HA

...she didn't deserve to be treated like that. She deserved a lot worse, a whole lot worse.

The 'heroine' in this tale is as much of a caricature as the doll of the same name. It is impossible to believe that even an upper-crust Brit would not detect her totally undisciplined escapades long before proposing to her! Plus, his parents would have had a background investigation done, and she would been 'outed' almost immediately.

I was worried there for a minute... Whew... I actually thought he was going to marry the slut... Yes bitch you deserve that & more! She got upset picturing her fiancé with another woman but it's ok for her to fuck anything with two legs? What a dirty slut... I'm glad he wasn't as stupid as the slut thought cause at the end it probably would've cost him a lot of money , humiliation, heartache & wasted time... What better way to get rid of the garbage that is this slut?

Just when you think that people couldn't be that brain dead. In the wild she would have been eaten early on. The gene pool would have experienced an increase in brain power. In our world how many more with the IQ of a small grain of sand continue to propagate? We see it on election day in so many countries and in the U.S. in particular. This poor lass just does not have the brain power to understand how she became what she became. A village bike!

She deserved WORSE!

She didn't deserved be treated so well after all she had done...But now she could keep living like she loved...She and her friends could found a whore house...But as usual a good story and good reading...

answer to her question: and then some!!!

Yours was a rhetorical question, right?

allow her to mete out her own punishment, TK U MLJ LV NV

she deserved all she got and more. Glad the groom to be didn't get stuck with her

You know what she deserved? To suffer.

Did she deserve everything that happened up to the end of the story? Yes!!! But, to be fair her suffering should not end there. It should turn colder and start raining, perhaps turning to sleet or snow. Then she should slip and break her leg. Just one leg will do. Oh, and she should be found before she freezes to death but after getting pneumonia. A fatal case of pneumonia that will take her days and days to die from. Being discovered to have infected her lovers with a particularly nasty group of STD'S would be a nice touch as well.

well i think she deserved more then that

his family has deep pockets and should be held to account, she's just a modern girl living life!

Was Dave's wife called Beth or Mel?

You should probably stick to one, I guess that's why the shorter stories are called flash stories (well, aside from the obvious innuendo here on Literotica), written in a flash, proofreading optional.

Got EXACTLY What She Deserved!!!

Hell, she deserved worse!

Where do these women get the idea that men wouldn’t be interested in variety as well? You can bet that if she even THOUGHT that Nick was banging her best friend she would kill him!

I don’t care how “innocent” he is; how could he not know that she wasn’t a virgin?

So many of these cheaters think that they can’t introduce new things to their husband/boyfriends? Don’t they talk to their girlfriends; don’t they watch Skinemax or read “Fifty Shades of Grey”? There are MANY ways they can explain knowing these things without having actually done them!

“But the thought of some other woman using my man's lovely cock, even just holding it, set me off in a rage.” – Not TOO much of a hypocrite, is she?

? Yes.!

?. yes it is a good story. why, because it shows what women can be like. Please don't get me wrong here, men can be just as bad.

She deserved that and worse, a couple STD's would be a great start.

she would work out good in brothel

Says nobody deserved what happened to her, fat chance she she got what she deserved. The fucking skank.

Another of your very best efforts. What's not to like?

More time on revenge and punishment

But still 4 stars

How the hell should we know? IUnless I missed it, there's no info!

Couldn't happen to a nicer whore,she is...

Her friends and there Boyfriends should be told .. Maybe some pictures or a Video ?

As short as this story was it was still too long. I got in enough to get a hearty dislike for this bitch and that was enough to make me look forward to her eventual downfall. Unfortunately, Britease decided it'd be a dandy idea to describe her slutting around for an excruciating period of time. While he has quite a lurid imagination, it did not make for fine reading. I ended up skimming from the start of her disgusting hen party to the wedding ceremony. In the end even that wasn't worth it. It should have been a much more cathartic uproar but essentially was just juvenile name calling in a church. Not really worth Nick's time and effort going through with the farce of a ceremony, so I don't know why he bothered. Not a great story.

One word Yes.

Absolutely!

Actually she deserved worse. Hopefully one of her last night fuckbuddies had ADIS.

She deserved it, for sure. End of story.

There is no explanation while Nick waited silently for a week to spring the reveal. Why bother? Just to ruin the day for her? Kind of a lot of work.

I agree with her. They weren’t married. Just cut her loose.

silly, poor ending

Silly. Why would Nick go through with all the effort of the wedding only to have it crash moments before it was finalized. Makes no sense. I guess there was a humiliation factor but it hardly seems worth it with how much a fizzle it was.

She got what she earned (deserved)!

I guess she'll get the answer after her next std test

U deserved worse. Have a good life hahahahahaha

I disliked the story because the innocent people such as the parents who paid for everything were hurt for a bit of juvenile humiliation and revenge. OK to punish the bride-to-be, but why punish her family which was innocent?

She'll land on her feet! Or at least on her back... She can start charging again for what she was giving away.

Definitely deserved it. She will indeed end up on her back. Her reputation is dead. She will never bag a wealthy man again. All she knows is how to be a slut. An out of control one. Even if she ends up with Dsve, will.be brief.

She deserves worse than she received

all that and more!

worse

You are in the wrong section to get any answer but one for our ex-bride's question. Perhaps, Erotic Couplings, or Group Sex if you want her to get a more even showing...

Anywho, fun story, well told, some flair of originality, although there was a problem with ignoring the problem of STDs.

Yes, she deserves what happened

Enjoyed it!

I thought i had met some Narcissist women in my time, but she took the cake. 5 stars, for leaving the slutty trash in the gutter!

After stripping on stage, and welcoming her gangbang by a bunch of strangers, she asks, " bet you'd all love a hen night like that, wouldn't you girls?" Call me old fashioned, and as a man I can't say for sure, but I doubt very many women have that on their bucket list. But, a very fun read from this writer, and not to be taken very seriously.

Abso-fucking-lutely.

After the hypocrisy. She got off quite easily.

Mentally ill persons like her need these type of rude awakening.

She got what was coming to her, but going through with (part of) the ceremony would have humiliated Nick as well. I think he would have pulled the plug earlier. Good story!!!

A bit over the top, wasn't it?

So was the punishment but the story was well done.