All Comments on 'Wedding Day Diversion'

It's always exciting to have some special taboo against getting together.

I liked the story, but the author did not proof read it. In the beginning they commented how good he looked in a suit, then when he was in Dora's apartment, she slid her hand into his jeans. Where and when did he get changed from the suit to Jeans? You need continuity to make a great story