All Comments on 'Wedding Revenge'

Good! Good! Good! Perfect ending. He definitely got what he deserved.And Shields still got the money.

This author needs English lessons in the worst way. Spelling, punctuation, consistency -- BMI becomes BIM -- and then the real howlers. Here is a sampling:<p><p>

there married friends<br>

her sexist voice<br>

His wife most be cheating on him<br>

lost the state title do to Bill cheating<br>

Exposing the exposed bodies of both men and women<br>

I'll bet there edible<p><p>

A semiliterate fourth grader could write better.<p>If a story is worth writing, it's worth writing better than this crap.

keep it going fuck ass w/o a name

"One woman lost all her inhabitation..." (third paragraph from the end of the first page).

<br><br><i>Please</i> get an editor.

Excellent, well done.