All Comments on 'Weekend Getaway Pt. 03'

Once again excellent job on Chapter 3. I can hardly wait to read 4. The anticipation for this weekend getaway and all it entails has obviously brought each of our characters to a fevered pitch. I think anticipation can often times be as much of an aphrodisiac as any physical accoutrements. Again one of the things I really enjoy from you as a writer is that you are careful to always very carefully describe each scenario, articulating not only sights, but sounds, tastes and textures. It makes us as readers feel as though we are participants, not just readers.