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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Breathtaking

I must say after reading this I was gasping for air...the intensity of this story is spot on and it certainly ticked my boxes for a good story...can't wait for you to cum up with another...mmmmm

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
great story

Great story. Very hot. Looking forward to lots and lots more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
good but

good but needs a little back ground who are they how long have they known each other how old are they what do they look like how long was he gone are they related perhaps cousins or brother and sister it's like walking into a movie when it's half over and leaving before it's over

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