All Comments on 'Welcome Home, Andy'

A truly beautiful lovestorey. You're a great writer. Like your style a lot and your outlook on life...... there's so much magic, if we let it!

The words painted a beautiful scene. Very nicely done.

Such a nice story of everyday people.

I loved the authour's use of language, rich and descriptive without being cloying.

Very nice piece of work.

The plot is interesting but not exceptional, but more than adequate to carry the other features of the story But sex is not what the story is primarily about. The portrayal of the characters is truly outstanding. Their descriptions, dialogue, and sentiments, are superbly done. I found myself wanting to enter the story, make friends with these people and become a part of that community. They are so real! The love story was touching. Both Jessica and Andy managed to finally air their failed relations and put their sad pasts behind them. (in a positive way).

All of them, (Andy, Jess, Tim, his spouse, and many others) are so real, and believable, that I could almost reach out and feel them.

The story is believable, gentle & contains compassion, and caring. (t resembles the musical "Brigadoon") Jessica's friends, and probably the whole town, protected her

and some probably conspired to have her meet Andy. With the probable with goal of them entering a serious relationship, as Andy suspected. (they succeeded!)

The sexual descriptions were, perhaps, a little long but were excellently described. It did not distract from the tale, it belongs there.

(the couple were made for each other).

In summary, this was a magnificent work, a joy to read, and one of the best romance stories at this site. Bravo! et merci.

Are you published anywhere else? I would love to read more.

Your talent is prodigious.

I wish you the best of tomorrows and happiness,

and thanks. Dan.

But a little more was wanted like a jump foreward in time or just the next morning

Yes another chapter

Well paced, written sin simple and damned good.

HP

I'm guessing you use a normal Word Proc (MSWord?), and you may have forgotten that 3 pages of Word are about one Lit page, and a comfortable story is three Lit pages.

And I think you write very well.

73

HP

great story

Great Story!

A festive favorite.

xxxhugsxxx

romance

warm fuzzies

love

family

and the holidays

I just wish Route66Girl was still writing for us

I really liked that...

I had to come back and read this again. It was even better this time.

Good Story, nicely presented.

home

This has got to be one of the sweetest, most precious stories I've ever read, thank you for writing it.

MoogPlayer

This is one of the few stories here I read and never get tired of. I know I've read it 5 or 6 times now. Classically fun and comfortable. I love it when the good guys get it in the end.

I have no words to describe what I have felt in reading this story, a great love story. Fantastic!

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

Been there and lived it........

I loved that.

Sexy, not gross.

Loved it.

Wish you had more stories available.

Thank you.

There are a few stories on this site that are always worth revisiting.

This is one of them.

So here I am again...enjoying it!

Keep up the good writing!

Actually, contrary to what the author said at the end, I felt like this was a short story. And a very very good one at that. Thanks, Route66Girl, great job.

What a beautiful and wonderfully crafted story...Great Job!

MP

That is what our imaginations are for

Awww... Well done. Thank you,

LWlurker

Only 28 comments in 18 years for this classic Romance wit a 4.8 rating?

A lot of people are missing a good read.

So many years since the author wrote, great potential lost to Literotica fans.

The Hoary Cleric, site guest.