by DrSqueaky
Well written and in need of additional chapters to "flesh" out the story.
Good storyline with attention to the small details. I hope that you continue the series in this vein.... something to look forward to!
RSUPS.
If Martin Summers doesn't want the job show me the dotted line and I'll sign my John Hancock faster than Simma can take dick-tayshun!!!
Your work here is new to me and I hope to be reading much more of it in the days and weeks ahead.
But not the last! I find this story to be entertaining and well-written, with very few grammar/spelling/punctuation errors, which is highly unusual here on Lit. :-)
Both here and in Superfucker.
How does DrSqueaky conjure it all up? And told so well after his devious mind conjures it.
Paul in Oklahoma
Hope that you will continue this series beyond chapter 2