All Comments on 'Welcome to the Jungle'

You have a good story here, you just need to edit a little better, you used spectacle instead of skeptical. Good start though! I hope you continue with another chapter. I'm curious to know if Bryce and Alice continue with a relationship.

nice story but needs a bit of editing, also could you please complete the story instead of leaving it hanging in the end.

I am loving this story keep it up and continue with it. It all very good!!

It touched my heart. Reminded me of a drummer who made me feel like this when I was a virgin. memories...

i loved it, keep going with it!

Thanks y'all for the feedback, I love it! This will be continued, I promise. It's a fun story. I caught a lot of my mistakes too late. I'll do a better editing job next time around. Should be up in around a week.

SultryLove - Nicely done! This is a well-told story with a lot of class to it. I'd love to read more and hope you will keep it going.

Please make a sequel i'm dying to know wat happens next!!!!! It's really classy

Well written & I sence a bit of autobiorgraphical feelings there. She needs to write more. 5 stars for a first effort.