All Comments on 'Well Used Pussy'

The let 13 year olds post stories on Lit?

What a load of cat vomit.

This is total Crap, please stop writing it , as soon as the friends leave and the husband is sleeping...the cops bust in and arrest his ass....haul him off to jail and he get butt raped to return the favor, that should be the story if these types of stories keep popping up

To-be the husband and be forced to do CLEAN-UP on all.YUM YUM

Your collection of words is not a story. You need to at least learn how to construct a basic sentence. There are many resources online to help you with that. Please use them!

Obvious fantasy....

Title says it all. Unbelievingly bad.

Casual racism aside, the whole thing was just unbelievably bad.

I sincerely hope English is not your first language. I would also like to know how to get that 3 minutes of my life back. Ugh.

Some tough comments here and perhaps well deserved for THIS story, BUT...some of your stories are my favorites, such as Wife Deborah and Mexican Whore. Perhap best thing is to look back at where you've received strong ratings and look to do more in that direction. Best of luck.

A 'maybe' good idea ruined by shit writing, shit grammar, shit language and......shit.

I had to give this story a 5

Could have been a good story. But you rushed through it so fast it sucked. Take your time and maybe a writing class or two wouldn't hurt...really sucks it couldn't have been longer and more detailed.