by sweetbabyjames
Great story about the benefits of a mature woman but also how friendship can develop into more......5 stars+
This has the making of a really hot story, but it needs some basic editing. Things like when you use dialogue, it's a new paragraph for each person speaking. It clears the confusion of who is talking. Good luck and keep up the good work
Myhands316
Hands,
Thanks for your comments. I checked out your stories and I learned a few things from your writing style.
Enjoyed your story. Worked to everyone's benefit which doesnt happen often.
Here's a mature man who has a level of wisdom not seen in most stories. The storyline is well thought out, but could be developed more, especially descriptively. Keep writing!
A very enjoyable read. Well written and good plot development. As with all stories that I enjoy reading, they are made more enjoyable if there's an element that reflects a part - large or small - of my own thoughts on something.
" I'll take a "mature" woman in her 40s or 50s any day over someone who is younger " says it all, no matter whether or not the relationship involves physical intimacy.
Usually don't go past the first few paragraphs of these stories, but I was captivated by this tale! Had my 62 yr old cock standing at attention!!!
Absolutely sucking fucking red hot, the lucky fucker. More and more please and soon. Cunt crazed fucker, Lanc’s U.K.