All Comments on 'What Anal Sex Has To Do With It.'

I just added you to my favorite author list. This was a great story.

i really didn't like it. it was poorly written and the way the narrator thinks about his wife is kind of gross. It made me remember one of the key reasons I married her. She looked hot. WTF? He married her cause she was hot, that's it? And women need emotion, men need sex? Gag. You're implying that women don't enjoy sex as much as men do. I assure you we do and we probably enjoy it more. This story might have been good if this were the 1950s but now it just seems kind of yucky.

To the poster below, if you thought this story was poorly written, what do you think a good story is?

I thought the story was well written. It held my interest. I had me wondering what this guy had in mind, once he bought the whipped cream.

I loved it and it was obvious to me that he loved his wife. This was more a love story than it was an anal sex story. If anything it opened my eyes to how couples treat one another.

Thank you author for this story.

the story was hot and fun and had great dialogue between the man and the woman hope there are more stories where that one came from

Do you fan/readers detect wishful 'female' anal fantasies, in the making. If so have you ever considered trying 'CFNM' exib/voyeur' category writing? My horny old husband reluctantly agreed to comply with 'that' fantasy, but now he enjoys being kept 'shaved and naked' more every day! -Go figure?

Luring readers into [her?] world skilfully, the sole criticism was a failure to describe his "Wife's" emotional elation in experiencing her total fulfillment and 'husband writer's initial feelings upon achieving the fullest possible anal penetration. NB; Orgasmic enemas are out of this world, we realise.

The romantic dinner introduction could possibly disguise a hint, of 'wife's' willingness to experience a gentle 'back door' entry, fot a first time. In fact kinky-minded women frequently fantasise over fuller sexual possibilities, to retain their partner's interest during sex, if completely honest. I'd advise: Start the wife's evening pantiless, wearing a remote vibrating anal butt plug, describing sensation of being sexually stimulated in public while planning private activity at home. EG: Frequently male' writers sacrifice plot building, unable to give realistic female' point of view, having agreed to experiment in other 'forbidden' activities!We believe 'Anal Experiences' have everything to do with, emotional fulfillment in any parntership. [Gay or straight]

'Erotic' realists are rated '5' prize-winners, so keep up your good work?