by nastystoryguy
The only thing I hate about these kinds of stories is having to wait for the next chapter. You've laid out something that looks to be fairly exciting and erotic. I don't think we'll be disappointed.
Great begining, sure hope you're able to follow through.As you stated in your story, there are quite a few women out there just like Laura. I know I have been involve with a few. Be carefully with your storey and (if possible) keep it real and believable.
Like it so far - it borders on the believable and that's necessary for me. So far I've given you a 75% but potential here for 100%. Being well written and correct para's spelling etc. doesn't distract from story. Look forward to more.
I'm not into heavy pain with women... however, this has the beginning of a very good and interesting story...
Great introduction into how twisted some of us can be! Now give her what she wants, no make that what she NEEDS and craves!
The great part about this is that with the mutual consent of the couple, he can continue this relationship for the rest of his life if he so chooses. Like the other poster said, he can take her to the limits, doing anything he wants to both of the participants. Hers to be a painslut, and his domination and humiliation too because he is a wimp cuckold, and will do anything to keep his wife. Every bull/master's dream come true. This guy has a free pass to be a real bad ass to the guy's wife, and her husband too.
He can do anything he wants to her, short of killing her, all with both of the couple's blessing.
Wow!!
the only criticism I have is the description of his size. I don't think so. Big is one thing, but 12" and the diameter of a beer can? Nah!
I hope that Scott and John will remain friends and that this story will not become a "I take over your wife completely" story. Scott should have Laura have sex with John as much as possible. Then Scott should have him spank her before he has sex with her. That might get John used to Laura's kink a lot better.
Also, I hope you don't subscribe to the "a pussy is a big can of playdough that gets stretched out and stays that way" type of thinking. It is a muscle and can be excersized and tightened.
This is a great story and I hope to read more of it.
I ordinarily don't think much of BDSM stories, but the psychological parts expressed so far do much to show the way both Doms and subs think, why they choose this lifestyle. That's of more interest to me than the actual sex bits.
There are way too many stories characterizing Doms as pain inflicting, uncaring, sadists when the exact opposite is true for REAL Dominants.
Normally I would not give a story intro 5 stars, but I can tell it is going to be hot, and right up my alley. I look forward to him making her "regret" it.
Laura should have tried to show her husband some light rough sex videos and eased him in to rough play
Giving your wife to another man to play with is really asking him to take her away for good !
Laura likes the comfort of a stable, loving, caring, financially secure relationship.
However her need for a sexual fix may want her to give that all up !