All Comments on 'What Happened That Night'

by Hethen129

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Ladd_RussoLadd_Russoover 9 years ago
Interesting

Looking forward to another chapter :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
shit shit shit

can no one finish a story another chapter my ass this one never got finished

Skippy0403Skippy0403over 9 years ago
Wonderful

Loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Ps don't let the douche bags both you. Good job. The last ass hat did not have the balls to put a name to the comment.

Hethen129Hethen129over 9 years agoAuthor
Working

If I read his comment right he as complaining the the story did not get finished. I am working on chapter two.

Actually just notcied that somehow the Ch.1 Got missing from the title please rest assured there is more coming for those who want it.

praitorianlord11praitorianlord11over 9 years ago
argh!

This sounds very interesting! Please tell me there is more of this in the works!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Why no sex?

:(

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
can't wait for the next installment

Amazing work, a few minor editing mistakes that are easy to miss, but big props to you and your editor.

Im always looking for great stories that hook me and I'm happy to say that this one did not disappoint. Keep up the great work and can't wait to read the rest.

I've got to create a lit profile, but you'll see me under Ryzzix. Same as my fetlife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Now don't you think of stopping

This is good. I like the quality of the writing as well as the story.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
this little mini intro is quite a tease

so far we know almost nothing but so much is foreshadowed it will be fun to see if it lives up to the potential.

hoping

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