All Comments on 'What Happens When I Beg'

your writing is pretty...raw....spelling, grammar, etc and i wonder if english second language? but i get over that quickly & quite enjoyed it, looking for further chapters? please? but one thing- the ending was very abrupt! i wanted him to tease & fuck her more....or at least more details bout it :)

This had alot of potential but your grammar is terrible. I don't usually notice or care about grammar but this was pretty bad. I really dug the story line but the typos and poor grammar were often distracting or confusing. BUT I'd still read more of your work if you choose to write again...maybe just proof read more?