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GoesGruntover 9 years agoMore Like Horror
The ending is so much like a Hollywood B-movie horror it was disappointing.
Anonymousover 10 years agoYou dolt (Comment reply, story was great)
The guy never touched his mother or sister, were you not paying attention?
Critique of the story: A little editing goes a long way, missed punctuation and all that.
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