All Comments on 'What Lana Taught Me Ch. 01-03'

by JorisKHuysmans

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
close but no cigar

ended too quickly. Expand on the third chapter, the ending--it will be perfect.

JorisKHuysmansJorisKHuysmansalmost 17 years agoAuthor
There's more coming!

There's actually nine chapters, fairly short so I'm posting them in sections of 3 each. The next one will be up in a few days. The first five or six were actually written a few years back, it went incomplete for a while, then I came up with a pretty wild ending and added that. So keep an eye out for the next part soon!

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