All Comments on 'What Price Desire'

hope to see writing more stories soon. the best of luck

your ending was very subtle, i think you chose best to end it in the way you did as opposed to adding an erotic scene.

it adds a sense of class to the story.

What I love most about this story is the way you did so much with so little actual violence. Incredibly elegant. Please write more? Thank you for this.

A wonderfully well written and entertaining story. Thank you for something that gives a better light to what lies within a submissive soul. Well done!

Great story, very well written & deeply interesting. Keep up the good work & I'm sure you will continue to capture our imaginations.

Fantasy Writer,

You've earned yourself a fan. You did this story justice by weaving innuendo into a story line that could have easily have taken a more graphic direction. I'm sure that Gabrielle will bring honor to her house. I enjoy your imagination and look forward to making my way through your other work.

Welcome back!

A very well written story told with great attention to detail. My only adverse comment is in a later story (Auction Block) Jonathon/Gabrielle trains a female called Gabrielle, perhaps a bit to much liking for the name? Having said that my latter comment should really apply to your wonderful story "Auction Block"

Do please keep writing.

I love it, the story shows the true meaning of a Dominant training a submissive, not too violent but also shows the feelings behind this story!!

Not normally into these stories, but I loved this. It was consensual and what he desired. Please keep this up! Thank you!