All Comments on 'What Rain Can Do'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
damn

i really liked this--very similar to certain fantasies of mine . . . keep writing!

sensenonsensesensenonsensealmost 17 years ago
good going

I really liked this. Very sensual and hot. Especially the girl pleasuring him part.

Well done!

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