All Comments on 'What the Hell Happened?'

by Willing2Do

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a lousy story.

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Not even worthy of *1 star, but a 0 won't bring the average down.

jtwheelsjtwheelsabout 5 years ago
Minus stars

Why enough of this already written

Sluts galore

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
You wrote a story about a complete moron

Could she even add 2+2 and get 4? I doubt it. Not a single likable thing in this mess.

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good

Hope you write more like it when a woman says cunt

Sounds more sexy

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
The reading suggests

that it was written by a man with gender orientation issues. A fantasy that wasn't very well written and had zero erotic appeal for anyone but the writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Al didnt like this? The reconcil at any cost hero

doesnt like this? This bimbo is on a one way track to HIV/AIDS but she knows it and is doing it on purpose. So why is she committing suicide, oh yeah, she married an asshole and she is getting revenge. Yep killing yourself is always a great way to get revenge on someone else, NOT! A trophy wife may be under a prenup and gets nothing for divorce, especially when she is doing it herself. But having living proof and selling it to a magazine that likes to print pure garbage could make her very rich. She could also write a book and go on shows like Oprah the idiot. Make money by losing that is the way to win not fucking yourself to death with the scum of the earth.

Alvaron53Alvaron53almost 16 years ago
WtHH is that I wasted my time reading this

About as erotic as a jackhammer repair manual.

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969almost 16 years ago
Well that's some revenge.

Just use plenty of lotion afterwards

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Hey writer I am telling you your spouse cheats on

you. Now strip and come here. That is what the story is saying.

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