All Comments on 'What Time Do You Get Off? Ch. 2'

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X-Factor over 3 years agoAuthor

I did change it up. This story is from 15 years ago. Read one of the newer ones!

Anonymousover 3 years ago

Notes

You use the same mmmmmph and ohhh in all your stories.

Need to change them up.

Also, all women

Have wisps of curly pubic hair. Same stuff over and over.

Need to change it up.

Anonymousover 3 years ago

great story telling

This chapter has an excellent introduction, a good build-up, and a fine plot, which is balanced perfectly by a love scene that is very well-written.

DWornock almost 13 years ago

That was hot.

Humans have evolved so that average size penis is the most desirable. Finally a writter that know that instead of guys with cocks so large they would be undesirable freaks of nature.

Anonymousalmost 15 years ago

unequal treatment

charmaine is doing so much more, quality not quantity for danny?

Anonymousover 18 years ago

Hot Stuff!!!

Love your stories! Some of the best on the net!!! PLEASE do not stop?!

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