All Comments on 'Whatcha Doing?'

Great story. It was erotic and classy.

A nice story, well told. Probably longer on the buildup than I needed, but that was well done also. Please write more.

I had to give this 5 stars because it wasn't just another unbelievable story to justify anal sex. It was plausible, thought provoking and not degrading as so many of these stories can be. I would say you have a talent here and I would encourage you to continue writing in much the same fashion.

love you too.should have my wife read this story

This story made me feel so cozy, so comfy, cuddled up on a sofa with my boyfriend, taking turns reading it aloud, getting all hot and wet (and he, hard) and then rushing to do everything you told us to do! When I got home later that night, my husband couldn't figure why I was so happy. Great story... more, please!

Marie

A story that only a long term married couple can truly appreciate.

nedthebundler

I sincerely hope you are not done writing. My wife doesn't like porn, but this is way beyond that. (see title). Please write some more, because your style is also romantic as well.

Good story.

This story has been around for a long time and the author only ever did the one, but damn, it was a good one! Talk about “drop the mike” writing. 5⭐️ because this deserves to be read, not lost amongst the Lit stacks. Ppfzz.