All Comments on 'What's That Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
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I enjoyed the story very much and i can't wait for the next chapter....but i do have one thing that is bothering me (I hope u don't mind my critique) why did Jeff torture that guy for information when he could have just taken control of his mind and have him tell him anything he wanted...that's like the first power he got from the ring.

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