All Comments on 'Wheeling Park Ch. 11'

Great story. I'd like to go to Wheeling park!

I love this story! I can't wait for the next installment. I would love it if in the end Trudy became the dominant one, surprising everyone. PLEASE, PLEASE don't stop.

i think u did well by improving jarids personality to match olivia.this is a good chapter.but i m still hanging in air whether i like series or not only due to olivia

I agree please keep it going.

Of all the stories I've read on Lit, this is the best I've ever read. The sex is great but more than that, I love the story, the tension and conflict, and the characters. This is real writing. I thank you for giving us the pleasure of your considerable talent!

Great fucking work.

You don't get enough credit for your work !