All Comments on 'When He Plays Piano in the Dark'

What a powerful moving piece. I wish I could give more then 5.

married to a musician I understand your story. Simply wonderful

This is beautiful! I love this. Beautiful, complicated story of love.

My goodness, that was beautiful! I'd better get busy so that I can feel worthy of our mutual fandom ;-D

I am an AVID reader of all genres and nothing has moved me like this. I pay damn good money, I mean 30 on up for novels that are not as captivating as this. You have reached genius status. Your brain has a brain...my dear who are you?

poignant. beautiful. and so sad.

This is why I bother to come back to Literotica. Every once in a while you run into a story that is so well written and sexy that I actually feel guilty for not having paid for it. They are far and few in between. This is definitely one. This grabbed my mind immediately and is written with such a heightened sense of awareness. Where have you been hiding?! I'm definitely checking your page for more. Thank you for this. Truly.

You can't end it there. The story is just too good. He has to come looking for her, he has to learn about the baby. Please give us some more.

That was good. I don't know whether to clap or cry. It's just that good. The sex was amazing but the story itself is beautiful. Well done ABG .

SO SADDENNING.

This was so beautifully sad.

I absolutely LOVE this story, but it's so heartbreaking. Please consider a second chapter. Pairen deserves a happy ending.

It needs one! There is so much u could do with this story! Son becomes a great pianist himself and pairen and daddy meet again at the sons show one night.....it would be phenomenallllll!

This was sad, lovely but sad.

OMG I love this so much. It got me tearing up! Please consider a sequel where Pairen gets her happy ending! Let Pairen and daddy meet and fall in love all over again! <3

I need a sequel I mean this touched me andI wanted her to stay please do a part 2 I want them together she had his child he gotta know please don't LEAVE ME!!!

I would be lying if I said that this didn't hit hard. I cried.

I wanted to cry. This novel is so beautiful

So sad but beautifully written.

Wait - what happened to him? Did he kill himself? Or did he just move on? If he's still alive, does he see his child?

This was very well-written, but I don't like open-endedness in stories like this.