All Comments on 'When Plans Change Ch. 03'

by TaraKoka

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elle_9549elle_9549almost 12 years ago

Very nice. I say ditch the boyfriend and go with Jae. ~ L

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love this story

Good job! I really enjoyed this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Loving the story so far

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
"Fruity" champagne?

What kind of crap is that?

TaraKokaTaraKokaalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks for reading!!!!

To give a few quick answers to feedback and comments....

Champagne can be fruity since made with grapes and are categorized as dry (less sweet) or doux (more sugar). I like it sweet!

Some aspects of the boyfriend are based on my most recent ex and Jae is based on a secret crush I have. ;)

I appreciate all constructive feedback either emailed or posted. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great chapters!

Please continue! Great piece. Keep writing andthe longer the better!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
IT was amazing

you should continue this i really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Don't change your plans

Love these kind of stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Men

Straight to chapter 4

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
pretty Good

he should have realized that if he could do it then she can do it also

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ugh. Women. Always the victim even when they are the problem.

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