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Click here"Now it's up to you. You do what you think best. I hope...well, I hope you seek out the truth. But I made a promise and I won't be bothering you again. Thank you for calling."
I hung up and leaned back in my chair. I reached into a left-hand drawer and pulled out an IPOD I'd bought for Kelly before her then-current boyfriend had bought an identical one for her. I'd kept it and put a few tunes on it that I liked. I leaned back in the chair, closed my eyes and listened to the words of a tune I liked.
And as the last words rang in my ears, "If tomorrow never comes..." I thanked Father Dunleavy again for reminding me of what is important in this life. If I died today, the two people I loved the most would never question my love for them. In spite of all the crap I had waded through over the past four months, that made it all worthwhile.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoI ask again, What happened to the RESTRAINING ORDER that Debbie put on Bill? How convenient that it was forgotten....
Author is losing track of the original story line....getting too many sidetracks. Watering down the story, and overloading it with too many other details.
It is starting to get confusing with all the tangents the author discusses.
jkthekat8 months agoVery entertaining FICTION ! I am loving it. Strong emotional power
as it makes me want to write the next page!!
Anonymous9 months agosucks! All the author talks about is her breasts and this laid or that laid. All these
pages same stuff only a different page.
Anonymous9 months agoThis story has depths that are almost never seen on this site. The writer here is good enough to do it as a profession.
Ramazaabout 1 year agoI think that Debbie has be subjected to a very harsh rape and assault by several men a while back, and some how is repressing those memories, and all that hurt and anger is now surfacing from her unconscious mind, and some how she blames Bill for it.
This is some damn good writing, lots of passion, emotions and some very believable characters, thank you for sharing your work with us.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoWhy not just end it after they walk out of the courthouse. I have a terrible feeing you're going to turn him into more of a sissy wimp than he's been so far.
dirtyoldbimanabout 1 year agoWait for readers as it gets better as this very long and sometimes needlessly long story reaches the end.
Ravey19over 1 year agoBoth got serious issues but looks as though Bill is trying to some right things.
dgfergieover 1 year agoTruly a tea jerker near the end. Many of us go thru life with lose ends, divorces and estranged kids and we wonder how to repair that? But on a brighter note Debbie ia one fucked up bitch, pardon my french. Always looking for someone else to blame. I mean what a shallow bitch. If every one got a divorce because the vision of the or husband had changed over the years I don't think you would see very many married people over the age of 50. But it is true a friend of went to a high school reunion of about 25 years and when he came back he said most of the guys had trophy wives just dumped the long time wives to trade 'up' or down as the case maybe. Pretty shallow people. I feel sorry for the young women who married assholes like that cause there 'older' husband will eventually dump them or get older and fat and maybe get dumped by them What goes around comes around. Still going strong with this very long story.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoPlease don't let this be some drawn out, cuck raac. It's been so very rewarding to this point.
kuu123over 2 years agoI really love your writing(its like reading a published novel) but I´m starting to fear that you maybe got in trouble with the pacing a bit. Currently I expect this story to end with a reconciliation but with the pacing of the story right now it will feel a bit sudden. Especially because we can see into both Bill and Debbies head and their thoughts... They are growing as people but not enough as a potential cupple. But maybe I end up wrong...I guess I´ll see in a few hours/days haha
ChimeraLoveMeeover 2 years agoI cant believe there are such despicable comments on such a great story.
